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Judy
8/24/2014 07:10:29 am
Enjoyed this very much at our last meeting, Brad.
Dee
8/25/2014 10:17:37 am
A terzanelle! I had never heard of this before - must get out the poetry dictionary.
Lyn
10/1/2014 02:23:22 am
Wow, very clever use of the 'surge' sound: churn, converge, journey, urge, merge. These rhymes work really well to support the more minor end rhymes - the discipline of this structure is tough! I hope there haven't been too many storm fronts? And I prefer 'treasured' shells to the change in the final line when you say 'mostly pretty shells'. To me, this rather trivialises the relationship. Those shells mean a lot, don't they? Leave a Reply. |
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